Comparing the key scenes
After viewing both Davids key scenes and Brendans key scenes, Both are very similar to each other although described in different details.
Heres the detailed version.
1. The first mission
On a remote base which was once an old factory, cobbled together with barbed wire and metal sheets and tarpaulin outside. Gealear rebels patrol the base. Unbeknownst to them, 4 shadowy figures are silently approaching them.
*Radio static* “Captain, this is Tracker, I see multiple targets up ahead, what should I do, over?”
One of the figures stops and reaches for the radio, “Tracker this is Howler, take out the two patrolmen to the north-west of the factory, the others and I will take out the rest at the south, over.”
The four figures approach the factory, suddenly the see the patrolmen’s bodies fall to the floor and they then neutralize the rest of the patrols and infiltrate the building. Howler commands them to stop, “Alright Silencer, keep a lookout. Scent, with me, we need to find the Intel and run before more show up.”
Howler and Scent rush upstairs of the factory, they find an office while searching for the Intel, the radio turns on with a panicked Tracker “Ah crap Howler, there’s an entire platoon arriving, I think they see the bodies, suggest you hurry it up”. Without reply or delay Howler and Scent rummage the office, finding whatever they can, they take physical files and hard drives, as requested.
Howler rushes downstairs to see Silencer planting explosives, Howler barks at him with shock “What the hell are you doing?” Silencer turned to Howler; “I’m using C-4 to blow the place sky high, it will send a message to the scum if I blow this place up and it will cripple the Gealear so they can't pillage and harm any more civilians.”
Howler signals Scent to exit the facility and rendezvous with Tracker back at the LZ. “Silencer, get out or I’m leaving you, the mission is going to go pear-shaped.” Roared Howler, gunfire erupting from the northwest as a platoon closes in on them. “Leave me, at least I’ll die with honour as a proud soldier for Vexan” Shouted Silencer.
Howler and the others bolted for the van where Tech was, leaving Silencer. They bobbed and weaved trying to avoid gunfire; Tracker picks off Gealear foot soldiers bit by bit while Silencer is off in the opposite direction, knowing he’s providing a distraction for the others to escape. He sets off the explosives taking many Gealear in the process. He runs through the trees and off into the night.
Howler and the others meet with Tracker, they hold off the remaining Gealear, before proceeding to Techs van. The gunfire dies down and they jump into the van, “GO, GET US THE HELL OY OF HERE!” Boomed Howler as tech drove off, heading back for base.
As the van drives towards the Vexan HQ the team rest in the back, fearing for what their Captain s might say. Scent, the youngest and most timid pipes up out of the deafening silence “Hey i-it’s uhm n-not all that bad, a-at least Silencer was able to help us escape”. The team exchange glances to each other “True, though I wish he wasn’t so god damn reckless all the time.” Howler sighed, wishing there was another way of making sure the squad comes back in one piece.
2. The debriefing
The team unloaded their equipment at the barracks and trudge to the Generals office, as they waited, they observed the hustle and bustle of the command centre, seeing officers and Intel specialists moving around with their safe yet still intense jobs outside of the war zone but their thoughts were interrupted as the door flung open, the General emerging from his office. “Team P.A.W, enter.” He boomed, the team rose up and shuffled into the office while dread was filling up, worse than any dread the Gealear could instil.
As the team lined up, the General sat down behind his desk, looking at the team, “Well P.A.W, that wasn’t terrible, you got the data but it seems subtly wasn’t on your side, I take it you got a reason” the General was more collected than usual.
“It seems Silencer wasn’t living up to his name sir and blew up the facility after we got the Intel, to cripple the Gealear.” Howler stated to the General in a formal and deadpan tone. The General smirked “Indeed, seems loyalty is a rather important to Silencer, maybe a bit too much but we need that kind of loyalty and Vigour. While he is M.I.A, we will send a search and rescue team to recover him, but none the less the mission was still a success, P.A.W.”
The team let out a sigh of relief and felt like a weight was off their shoulders. “However while you can rest easy for a couple of days, you’ll have another mission, this time more data collection but this time the data is not sensitive to Gealear, its sensitive Vexan info and baseless propaganda, it needs to be returned and destroyed. As for Silencer, As for Silencer, we will update you on his whereabouts while you have your rest. Now, DISMISSED!” The team departed to their barracks with due haste.
In the barracks, P.A.W confined about what this mission would entail. Howler briefed the team with the information the General provided and the research Tech also conducted. “Alright team, we need to recover some sensitive material and slander against the vexan, the only semblance if law left” Said Howler, while he built up with confidence with each word. “We need to get the info back and find out who is doing this and put an end to it, they can’t slander the only morally just institution in this land and this time no blowing up buildings, this is a stealth op.” Howler barked as he paced in front of the team. He also added, “Now we head out for the base in two days. In the mean time, get stocked up, get any check up’s to make sure you are ready for this mission and most importantly, rest. Understood?”
“Understood!” Bellowed the remaining members of P.A.W before dispersing out to prepare for their mission.
3. The rescue
Howler and Scent both proceeded to the building, using debris and crates, trucks, walls, whatever could be used as cover, avoiding spotlights and staying silent. When they reached the building, they proceeded to climb into an open window; Howler turned on the radio “Tech we’re in, you and Tracker keep an eye out for any activity we’ll report to you if we find anything.” Howler and Scent proceeded up a level of the building, they found a secluded room with a guard, Scent suddenly noticed a figure, tied up and unconscious, it was Silencer, “Howler, l-l-Look its, its Silencer, is he, is he ok?” Howler then peered in and noticed Silencer, “Let's find out, you take the guard, I’ll untie him, on my command, 1…. 2…. 3!” Scent rushed the guard and knocked pinned him to the ground, aiming his gun while Howler went to check on the prisoner.
4. The truth
It was indeed Silencer and he seemed to be in a bad way, bruised and dazed. “Hey Silencer, it's me, Howler, you ok?” Howler said while uniting him. Silencer groaned and got up, wobbling while holding his head in pain, “Damn they don’t half hit, thanks guys, they were ruthless but I didn’t break.” Howler patted him on the shoulder and proceed to walk over to Scent, “Let me deal with him, I’ll get him to talk.” Said Howler with anger and determination. Scent moved to one side as Howler grabbed the guard by the collar “Where is the sensitive Vexan data you Gealear scum or I’ll throw you out the window, no hesitation.” Howler demanded with pure anger behind his words. The guard spat at him and laughed, “Go to hell”. This only made Howler angrier as he decked the guards face multiple times; each hit harder and filled with more anger than the last. “Tell. Me. NOW!” Demanded Howler, as he continued to punch the guards face. The guard spat blood and sighed in pain, “OK, Ok it's on the top floor in the room full of computers, the files password is Vexan235.” Howler dropped him and wiped his hands, “Thanks.” He signalled the team to follow him.
“Tech, Tracker its Howler, we have Silencer, proceeding to get the info, rendezvous at the van soon” As they proceeded, Silencer piped up, “Not bad back there, could’ve been smoother though.” Howler stopped and turned around “That’s rich coming from you.” Howler laughed. Silencer smirked as he put back on his mask.
Suddenly Howlers words were cut short as a menacing voice boomed through the silent night air “Don’t worry my old Captain, Tracker is safe, we’re just catching up is all.” Howler turned to see a familiar figure, holding a handgun to trackers head, with a half-broken P.A.W mask and black military suit. “Lo…Loyal, is that you? No, it can't be, you di-” Howler said with shock before Loyal interjected “Yes, it's me you fool, happy to see me? I never forgot how you and Vexan left me to die never searching for me, SEEMS LIKE YOU STILL SERVE YOUR OPPRESSIVE OVERLORDS, HUH CAPTAIN?” Shouted Loyal, filling with fury as his soldiers surrounded the team. “I’m sorry Loyal but I didn’t know, please let go of Tracker and we can talk this out, please,” Howler said, with shock and sadness behind each word, while edging closer to the former comrade.
“No Howler, how about you see the files you so graciously borrowed and now you can see what your glorious Vexan really are.” Loyal said smirking, knowing something his old friends didn’t.
Howler slowly turned to Tech, waving at Silencer and Scent to go over to the computer monitor while Gealear soldiers are pointing their guns at them, another Gealear soldier also brought over Tracker, Tech brought up the files and opened them, most were images and videos of Vexan soldiers, burning forests, kidnapping children, polluting local water supplies with waste, tortures and mass genocide. Howler and team looked on in disgust and shock, everything they knew was a lie. Vexan was a symbol of peace and security, hope and justice but it was all a lie.
Loyal paced over, “I’m sorry Howler but now you see what the Vexan really are, they aren’t champions of freedom, they’re corrupt, all they want is power and domination on this land. They saw a vacuum and knew they could spin their lies, so people will trust them but underneath it all they will kill, maim, slaughter and ruin whoever stands in their way, they pollute water supplies and burn crops so locals would be forced to join them no matter what and those who oppose them or refuse…well you saw what happened.” Howler turned to him, tears rolling behind the mask, in shock, “I’m sorry I didn’t know, I-” Before Howler could finish, Silencer erupted, pulling out his gun in fury “No Captain, don’t believe this traitorous scum, he’s framed us and out for revenge!”
Howler turned to him and sighed, ripping the Vexan patch and stepping back beside Loyal, “I’m sorry but I can't condone this, no matter what Vexan have done for us, they have ruined countless more lives in the process, I stand against tyranny and injustice, that’s my goal.” Silencer felt shocked, angered and betrayed. Suddenly Tech, Scent and Tracker stood beside Howler, ripping their patches too. “We aren’t blind fanatics Silencer, we’re freedom fighters, unlike you.” Said Tracker, Silencer was violently shaking with anger, “No, NOOO, you can’t, I WON'T LET YOU DEFILE THE GLORY OF VEXAN!” Silencer screamed as he opened fire, letting off two rounds before Howler tackled and pinned him while the gun fell out of Silencers hand.
Howler turned back to see Scent still in fear and a red patch on his stomach, he fell to the floor, while Tech, Loyal and Tracker tended to him in shock and panic. Howler was filled with a flurry of emotions, screaming as he began to strike at Silencer. Both soldiers traded heavy blows; each filled with anger, pain and emotions more brutal than the next. Both formers friends wanted their newfound enemy to suffer. One moment Howler had the upper hand while the next, so did Silencer and then out of nowhere, Silencer got his handgun and whipped Howler over the face knocking Howler unconscious. All Howlers eyes could see was a flash of red then faded it to Black, dazed and in pain. Silencer aimed the gun at Howler; ready to pull the trigger, yet he couldn’t, looking over at Scent and muttered “Goodbye…” as he felt regret and ran off, the Gealear soldiers then were about to open fire on him when Loyal shouted, “Stop leave him be, we have pressing matters, tend to Scent and Howler, NOW ON THE DOUBLE.”
5. The epilogue
Meanwhile, hours later, far from Howler and P.A.W with their troubles, a new trouble started brewing, Silencer came limping into the Vexan HQ, shouting, “GENERAL…. GENERAL!” He fell to his knees, the General stood before Silencer, the rain poured and the thunder cracked from outside. “SILENCER, you’re alive, thank God. Where are the others, did they make it, did you retrieve the data?” Silencer looked up, in pain, tears began to roll, “No sir, the rest betrayed us, and they have the info, I’m sorry.”
The General erupted with a bellowing “WHAT!? HOW COULD THEY? To think they were my most trusted soldiers…” He paused then, considering their next move. “No matter Silencer, they may have gotten away but they’re bound to make a mistake and reveal themselves. We will hunt them down like the savages they are and bring them to justice along with the rest of Gealear. They can’t hide forever. ”
The General becoming more colder and calculating considering the possibilities, “You were always my most loyal soldier Silencer, so when you recover, we will then reconsider our strategy. I will assign you to lead a new black ops group and hunt Howler and P.A.W down, FOR THE GLORY OF VEXAN!” Bellowed the General.
Heres the detailed version.
1. The first mission
On a remote base which was once an old factory, cobbled together with barbed wire and metal sheets and tarpaulin outside. Gealear rebels patrol the base. Unbeknownst to them, 4 shadowy figures are silently approaching them.
*Radio static* “Captain, this is Tracker, I see multiple targets up ahead, what should I do, over?”
One of the figures stops and reaches for the radio, “Tracker this is Howler, take out the two patrolmen to the north-west of the factory, the others and I will take out the rest at the south, over.”
The four figures approach the factory, suddenly the see the patrolmen’s bodies fall to the floor and they then neutralize the rest of the patrols and infiltrate the building. Howler commands them to stop, “Alright Silencer, keep a lookout. Scent, with me, we need to find the Intel and run before more show up.”
Howler and Scent rush upstairs of the factory, they find an office while searching for the Intel, the radio turns on with a panicked Tracker “Ah crap Howler, there’s an entire platoon arriving, I think they see the bodies, suggest you hurry it up”. Without reply or delay Howler and Scent rummage the office, finding whatever they can, they take physical files and hard drives, as requested.
Howler rushes downstairs to see Silencer planting explosives, Howler barks at him with shock “What the hell are you doing?” Silencer turned to Howler; “I’m using C-4 to blow the place sky high, it will send a message to the scum if I blow this place up and it will cripple the Gealear so they can't pillage and harm any more civilians.”
Howler signals Scent to exit the facility and rendezvous with Tracker back at the LZ. “Silencer, get out or I’m leaving you, the mission is going to go pear-shaped.” Roared Howler, gunfire erupting from the northwest as a platoon closes in on them. “Leave me, at least I’ll die with honour as a proud soldier for Vexan” Shouted Silencer.
Howler and the others bolted for the van where Tech was, leaving Silencer. They bobbed and weaved trying to avoid gunfire; Tracker picks off Gealear foot soldiers bit by bit while Silencer is off in the opposite direction, knowing he’s providing a distraction for the others to escape. He sets off the explosives taking many Gealear in the process. He runs through the trees and off into the night.
Howler and the others meet with Tracker, they hold off the remaining Gealear, before proceeding to Techs van. The gunfire dies down and they jump into the van, “GO, GET US THE HELL OY OF HERE!” Boomed Howler as tech drove off, heading back for base.
As the van drives towards the Vexan HQ the team rest in the back, fearing for what their Captain s might say. Scent, the youngest and most timid pipes up out of the deafening silence “Hey i-it’s uhm n-not all that bad, a-at least Silencer was able to help us escape”. The team exchange glances to each other “True, though I wish he wasn’t so god damn reckless all the time.” Howler sighed, wishing there was another way of making sure the squad comes back in one piece.
2. The debriefing
The team unloaded their equipment at the barracks and trudge to the Generals office, as they waited, they observed the hustle and bustle of the command centre, seeing officers and Intel specialists moving around with their safe yet still intense jobs outside of the war zone but their thoughts were interrupted as the door flung open, the General emerging from his office. “Team P.A.W, enter.” He boomed, the team rose up and shuffled into the office while dread was filling up, worse than any dread the Gealear could instil.
As the team lined up, the General sat down behind his desk, looking at the team, “Well P.A.W, that wasn’t terrible, you got the data but it seems subtly wasn’t on your side, I take it you got a reason” the General was more collected than usual.
“It seems Silencer wasn’t living up to his name sir and blew up the facility after we got the Intel, to cripple the Gealear.” Howler stated to the General in a formal and deadpan tone. The General smirked “Indeed, seems loyalty is a rather important to Silencer, maybe a bit too much but we need that kind of loyalty and Vigour. While he is M.I.A, we will send a search and rescue team to recover him, but none the less the mission was still a success, P.A.W.”
The team let out a sigh of relief and felt like a weight was off their shoulders. “However while you can rest easy for a couple of days, you’ll have another mission, this time more data collection but this time the data is not sensitive to Gealear, its sensitive Vexan info and baseless propaganda, it needs to be returned and destroyed. As for Silencer, As for Silencer, we will update you on his whereabouts while you have your rest. Now, DISMISSED!” The team departed to their barracks with due haste.
In the barracks, P.A.W confined about what this mission would entail. Howler briefed the team with the information the General provided and the research Tech also conducted. “Alright team, we need to recover some sensitive material and slander against the vexan, the only semblance if law left” Said Howler, while he built up with confidence with each word. “We need to get the info back and find out who is doing this and put an end to it, they can’t slander the only morally just institution in this land and this time no blowing up buildings, this is a stealth op.” Howler barked as he paced in front of the team. He also added, “Now we head out for the base in two days. In the mean time, get stocked up, get any check up’s to make sure you are ready for this mission and most importantly, rest. Understood?”
“Understood!” Bellowed the remaining members of P.A.W before dispersing out to prepare for their mission.
3. The rescue
Howler and Scent both proceeded to the building, using debris and crates, trucks, walls, whatever could be used as cover, avoiding spotlights and staying silent. When they reached the building, they proceeded to climb into an open window; Howler turned on the radio “Tech we’re in, you and Tracker keep an eye out for any activity we’ll report to you if we find anything.” Howler and Scent proceeded up a level of the building, they found a secluded room with a guard, Scent suddenly noticed a figure, tied up and unconscious, it was Silencer, “Howler, l-l-Look its, its Silencer, is he, is he ok?” Howler then peered in and noticed Silencer, “Let's find out, you take the guard, I’ll untie him, on my command, 1…. 2…. 3!” Scent rushed the guard and knocked pinned him to the ground, aiming his gun while Howler went to check on the prisoner.
4. The truth
It was indeed Silencer and he seemed to be in a bad way, bruised and dazed. “Hey Silencer, it's me, Howler, you ok?” Howler said while uniting him. Silencer groaned and got up, wobbling while holding his head in pain, “Damn they don’t half hit, thanks guys, they were ruthless but I didn’t break.” Howler patted him on the shoulder and proceed to walk over to Scent, “Let me deal with him, I’ll get him to talk.” Said Howler with anger and determination. Scent moved to one side as Howler grabbed the guard by the collar “Where is the sensitive Vexan data you Gealear scum or I’ll throw you out the window, no hesitation.” Howler demanded with pure anger behind his words. The guard spat at him and laughed, “Go to hell”. This only made Howler angrier as he decked the guards face multiple times; each hit harder and filled with more anger than the last. “Tell. Me. NOW!” Demanded Howler, as he continued to punch the guards face. The guard spat blood and sighed in pain, “OK, Ok it's on the top floor in the room full of computers, the files password is Vexan235.” Howler dropped him and wiped his hands, “Thanks.” He signalled the team to follow him.
“Tech, Tracker its Howler, we have Silencer, proceeding to get the info, rendezvous at the van soon” As they proceeded, Silencer piped up, “Not bad back there, could’ve been smoother though.” Howler stopped and turned around “That’s rich coming from you.” Howler laughed. Silencer smirked as he put back on his mask.
Suddenly Howlers words were cut short as a menacing voice boomed through the silent night air “Don’t worry my old Captain, Tracker is safe, we’re just catching up is all.” Howler turned to see a familiar figure, holding a handgun to trackers head, with a half-broken P.A.W mask and black military suit. “Lo…Loyal, is that you? No, it can't be, you di-” Howler said with shock before Loyal interjected “Yes, it's me you fool, happy to see me? I never forgot how you and Vexan left me to die never searching for me, SEEMS LIKE YOU STILL SERVE YOUR OPPRESSIVE OVERLORDS, HUH CAPTAIN?” Shouted Loyal, filling with fury as his soldiers surrounded the team. “I’m sorry Loyal but I didn’t know, please let go of Tracker and we can talk this out, please,” Howler said, with shock and sadness behind each word, while edging closer to the former comrade.
“No Howler, how about you see the files you so graciously borrowed and now you can see what your glorious Vexan really are.” Loyal said smirking, knowing something his old friends didn’t.
Howler slowly turned to Tech, waving at Silencer and Scent to go over to the computer monitor while Gealear soldiers are pointing their guns at them, another Gealear soldier also brought over Tracker, Tech brought up the files and opened them, most were images and videos of Vexan soldiers, burning forests, kidnapping children, polluting local water supplies with waste, tortures and mass genocide. Howler and team looked on in disgust and shock, everything they knew was a lie. Vexan was a symbol of peace and security, hope and justice but it was all a lie.
Loyal paced over, “I’m sorry Howler but now you see what the Vexan really are, they aren’t champions of freedom, they’re corrupt, all they want is power and domination on this land. They saw a vacuum and knew they could spin their lies, so people will trust them but underneath it all they will kill, maim, slaughter and ruin whoever stands in their way, they pollute water supplies and burn crops so locals would be forced to join them no matter what and those who oppose them or refuse…well you saw what happened.” Howler turned to him, tears rolling behind the mask, in shock, “I’m sorry I didn’t know, I-” Before Howler could finish, Silencer erupted, pulling out his gun in fury “No Captain, don’t believe this traitorous scum, he’s framed us and out for revenge!”
Howler turned to him and sighed, ripping the Vexan patch and stepping back beside Loyal, “I’m sorry but I can't condone this, no matter what Vexan have done for us, they have ruined countless more lives in the process, I stand against tyranny and injustice, that’s my goal.” Silencer felt shocked, angered and betrayed. Suddenly Tech, Scent and Tracker stood beside Howler, ripping their patches too. “We aren’t blind fanatics Silencer, we’re freedom fighters, unlike you.” Said Tracker, Silencer was violently shaking with anger, “No, NOOO, you can’t, I WON'T LET YOU DEFILE THE GLORY OF VEXAN!” Silencer screamed as he opened fire, letting off two rounds before Howler tackled and pinned him while the gun fell out of Silencers hand.
Howler turned back to see Scent still in fear and a red patch on his stomach, he fell to the floor, while Tech, Loyal and Tracker tended to him in shock and panic. Howler was filled with a flurry of emotions, screaming as he began to strike at Silencer. Both soldiers traded heavy blows; each filled with anger, pain and emotions more brutal than the next. Both formers friends wanted their newfound enemy to suffer. One moment Howler had the upper hand while the next, so did Silencer and then out of nowhere, Silencer got his handgun and whipped Howler over the face knocking Howler unconscious. All Howlers eyes could see was a flash of red then faded it to Black, dazed and in pain. Silencer aimed the gun at Howler; ready to pull the trigger, yet he couldn’t, looking over at Scent and muttered “Goodbye…” as he felt regret and ran off, the Gealear soldiers then were about to open fire on him when Loyal shouted, “Stop leave him be, we have pressing matters, tend to Scent and Howler, NOW ON THE DOUBLE.”
5. The epilogue
Meanwhile, hours later, far from Howler and P.A.W with their troubles, a new trouble started brewing, Silencer came limping into the Vexan HQ, shouting, “GENERAL…. GENERAL!” He fell to his knees, the General stood before Silencer, the rain poured and the thunder cracked from outside. “SILENCER, you’re alive, thank God. Where are the others, did they make it, did you retrieve the data?” Silencer looked up, in pain, tears began to roll, “No sir, the rest betrayed us, and they have the info, I’m sorry.”
The General erupted with a bellowing “WHAT!? HOW COULD THEY? To think they were my most trusted soldiers…” He paused then, considering their next move. “No matter Silencer, they may have gotten away but they’re bound to make a mistake and reveal themselves. We will hunt them down like the savages they are and bring them to justice along with the rest of Gealear. They can’t hide forever. ”
The General becoming more colder and calculating considering the possibilities, “You were always my most loyal soldier Silencer, so when you recover, we will then reconsider our strategy. I will assign you to lead a new black ops group and hunt Howler and P.A.W down, FOR THE GLORY OF VEXAN!” Bellowed the General.
“For*cough*for the glory of Vexan my General!” Silencer knew, his time was will come when he must find and execute Howler, P.A.W. along with the Gealear forces, while he was unsure if he could kill his old friends, he knew what had to be done, for the greater good. Silencer rose up and faced the General, wiping the blood from his mouth and coldly said, “I will have no mercy, and I will hunt them down and make them suffer for this betrayal. I will leave them broken!”
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